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About Me and The Site
Thanks for stopping by. This is not a collection of gaffes, as when a character is holding a drink in his left hand and a second later from another angle it’s in his right. I go deeper, at least I think I do- into the structure of the story, the character’s arc, etc. My name [...]
Fever Pitch
This had its cute moments, but could’ve been better. The spring training discussion made me laugh out loud and that’s rare. Structure/Plot Romantic comedies are all about keeping the guy and girl from falling in love or committing to each other till the end. Here, the second act started with the right recipe for such [...]
A Few Good Men
Character When’s the last time a young, pretty woman did not develop a romantic connection with the male lead? That was refreshing. What bothered me was that Demi Moore’s character felt more like a tool of the writer’s than an actual character in the film. She was constantly pressing Tom Cruise- especially in the first [...]